Wednesday, April 1, 2009

knack, varied, crush, 3 word wednesday

A sudden, crushing blow to my heart.
Varied emotions to follow.
Finding the knack of learning to survive, alone.

12 comments:

Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

Nicely done. True words, feelings. And welcome to 3WW.

Sherri B. said...

You did such a great job with these words! You said a whole lot in a very seamless way.

sudharm baxi said...

"Finding the knack of learning to survive, alone"

Fantastic..so much in so few, really bang on..

Jacqueline Dove said...

So much said, so succinctly.

gautami tripathy said...

Well put.

Keep writing.

mainline to the heart

Ofira Sephiroth said...

Very nicely written.

Unknown said...

To the point, heartbreakingly so. Loved the last line. Nice work.

Lucy said...

hope this is fiction
I could feel the sense of loss
great job with prompt
Hope u enjoy 3 ww each week!

Tumblewords: said...

I hope it's fiction - well written!

Andy Sewina said...

Phew, strong emotions here, 'she' sounds like a surviver - but alone, is never good, maybe she should try to mix!

Makes great poetry!

Angel said...

Alot of emotional impact in so few words.

Anonymous said...

love the flow and tide of real life events reflected... nothing wrong with standing alone.. it is empowering... tho nothing wrong with leaning on someone either...