Nicely done. True words, feelings. And welcome to 3WW.
You did such a great job with these words! You said a whole lot in a very seamless way.
"Finding the knack of learning to survive, alone"Fantastic..so much in so few, really bang on..
So much said, so succinctly.
Well put.Keep writing.mainline to the heart
Very nicely written.
To the point, heartbreakingly so. Loved the last line. Nice work.
hope this is fictionI could feel the sense of lossgreat job with promptHope u enjoy 3 ww each week!
I hope it's fiction - well written!
Phew, strong emotions here, 'she' sounds like a surviver - but alone, is never good, maybe she should try to mix!Makes great poetry!
Alot of emotional impact in so few words.
love the flow and tide of real life events reflected... nothing wrong with standing alone.. it is empowering... tho nothing wrong with leaning on someone either...
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Nicely done. True words, feelings. And welcome to 3WW.
You did such a great job with these words! You said a whole lot in a very seamless way.
"Finding the knack of learning to survive, alone"
Fantastic..so much in so few, really bang on..
So much said, so succinctly.
Well put.
Keep writing.
mainline to the heart
Very nicely written.
To the point, heartbreakingly so. Loved the last line. Nice work.
hope this is fiction
I could feel the sense of loss
great job with prompt
Hope u enjoy 3 ww each week!
I hope it's fiction - well written!
Phew, strong emotions here, 'she' sounds like a surviver - but alone, is never good, maybe she should try to mix!
Makes great poetry!
Alot of emotional impact in so few words.
love the flow and tide of real life events reflected... nothing wrong with standing alone.. it is empowering... tho nothing wrong with leaning on someone either...
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