mytegirl: allure, perch, vivid 3 word wednesday

Wednesday, April 15, 2009

My chickens perched on a rail.
A vivid memory.
After the red fox arrives
with cunning allure.

Sherri B. said...: Vivid, indeed! I loved the sinister feel invoked by the approach of that sly fox...; April 15, 2009 at 6:48 AM
floreta said...: i wonder what memory the chicken has! good job with the prompt.; April 15, 2009 at 7:02 AM
Thom Gabrukiewicz said...: Plucked away by the sly fox. Great read.; April 15, 2009 at 7:03 AM
Daily Panic said...: sneaky - poor chickens.; April 15, 2009 at 8:14 AM
gautami tripathy said...: Good one!

split moment Kill Word Verification; April 15, 2009 at 9:04 AM
Andy Sewina said...: Phew, you've gotta watch out for the fox!; April 15, 2009 at 9:07 AM
Anonymous said...: I like this one. I'm wondering if the punctuation was intentional to blur whether it is the chickens vividly remembering the fox and perching on the rail in fear ... or the narrator remembering the actions of the chickens after the fox has already struck (perching on the rail to escape the fox and the narrator surprised by it).; April 15, 2009 at 9:52 AM
Voices of NLD said...: watch for that fox! Wonderfully done

http://courtingdestiny.com; April 15, 2009 at 10:53 AM
Angel said...: Mean ole fox!; April 15, 2009 at 12:37 PM
quin browne said...: short, sweet and to the well deserved point; April 15, 2009 at 1:19 PM
Tumblewords: said...: Wise and vivid, indeed! Great job!; April 15, 2009 at 3:00 PM